2017年全国卷（新课标II）高考英语试题之写作技巧

　　写作一直以来是高考的一个重点难题，我们在平时生活中听到最多的是高考作文。语文考试，写作是重点，英语考试，写作也是必不可少的，一般写作占总体分值的比例是很大的，稍微注意一些，分数就可以填补回来。在英语写作当中，语法问题是要重点关注的。今天考名校小编为大家搜集一些2017年全国卷新课标英语写作试题，大家可以参考学习。

　　第四部分 写作(共两节，满分35分)

　　第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for(删) some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students ∧pick the fresh vegetables!

　　71. ____

　　不定代词

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang是两个人，表示“两者都”应用both，all表示“三者或三者以上都”。故此处的all应改为both。

　　all→both

　　72. ____

　　冠词

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　hour是以元音音素开头的单词，故前面的不定冠词应用an。“一小时”也可表示为one hour。故此处的a应改为an/one。

　　a→an/one

　　73. ____

　　固定搭配

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　句意：在空闲时间，他们喜欢在院子里种菜。“对……感兴趣”应表示为be interested in，故应将此处的interesting改为interested。

　　interesting→interested

　　74. ____

　　定语从句

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　这是一个非限制性的定语从句。先行词是garden，指物，关系代词应用which。故此处的that应改为which。

　　that→which

　　75. ____

　　副词的用法

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　此题无需用比较级，应用副词early修饰动词，故此处的earlier应改为early。

　　earlier→early

　　76. ____

　　动词的用法

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for (删) some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　bought是及物动词，后接宾语时不加介词，故此处的for应删去。

　　删去for

　　77. ____

　　副词的用法

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　修饰整个句子应用副词Besides。故此处的Beside应改为Besides。

　　Beside→Besides

　　78. ____

　　名词的数

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　information是不可数名词，无复数形式，故此处的informations应改为information。

　　informations→information

　　79. ____

　　时态;主谓一致

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　根据整篇文章的内容可知，整篇文章的主要时态是一般现在时，主语是summer，故谓语应用第三人称单数形式。故此处的came应改为comes。

　　came→comes

　　80. ____

　　非谓语动词

　　Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them

　　about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

　　这是一个简单句，文中已经有谓语动词invite ，故后面的动词pick应用非谓语动词的形式， “邀请某人做某事”应表示为invite sb. to do sth.故应在pick前加to。

　　pick前加to